Oooh yeah!!! I am so happy to see some CM fic from you, even angst fic (well ok, ESPECIALLY angst fic, because I love angst fic)
This is very good. I have to say that my favorite is the 3rd part. Because I can SEE Garcia. I will be honest and say that I think you write Emily better than JJ. (You know, from the whole 2 fics I've read of yours) but somehow you just "got" Emily's voice. And while this is very good, it feels like maybe you don't quite have JJ's character down. Then again, especiallys ince she went all straight on us, its been harder to nail her down.
I do think its very in character. The furtive hiding, Emily not thinking she's worthy, JJ conflicted. Its really excellent.
*bounce* yeah!! I want to see more of these two! And i swear I will get to your fic, as soon as I finish In Plain Sight season 1 because omg that show is AMAZING
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This is very good. I have to say that my favorite is the 3rd part. Because I can SEE Garcia. I will be honest and say that I think you write Emily better than JJ. (You know, from the whole 2 fics I've read of yours) but somehow you just "got" Emily's voice. And while this is very good, it feels like maybe you don't quite have JJ's character down. Then again, especiallys ince she went all straight on us, its been harder to nail her down.
I do think its very in character. The furtive hiding, Emily not thinking she's worthy, JJ conflicted. Its really excellent.
*bounce* yeah!! I want to see more of these two! And i swear I will get to your fic,
as soon as I finish In Plain Sight season 1 because omg that show is AMAZING