Oh good, I do love your writing, but you asked for constructive feedback, so there it is :)
And is it sad that the only thing I find hotter than Mary in a dress is Mary in black slacks, a white wife beater, covered in sweat, blood and dirt, her hair all messy, shooting it out with the bad guys? Because yeah....*Iz ded*
no subject
And is it sad that the only thing I find hotter than Mary in a dress is Mary in black slacks, a white wife beater, covered in sweat, blood and dirt, her hair all messy, shooting it out with the bad guys? Because yeah....*Iz ded*