Yay! I'm glad you found my idea useful :D

Like what I've read so far, excited to see how it ends. One small thing I think made it past the finale revision: they live in different areas of the city, the come from different places

I think it should read: they live in different areas of the city, they come from different place.

Having had several of my own typos make it through to the posted version, thought you'd want to know :D